Well actually my blog is one of my English unit ,teacher said we have to finish three blog so this is actually a test ,but I will still try my best.Ok we will talk about the food in the school today.Did you ever eat Chinese food before, well if you try it before in might say that it taste really good cause the Chinese food is really good that is the truth.
This is Chinese food you see before ,but the food in my school is different ,there is some delicious food in school but the cooker not often cook them ,we often ate is the food that cook with oil yes it cook with oil a lot oil do you know how much did they put inside?Ok when you eating that food you will just feel like you are drinking oil it really a lot ,you are not going to like it it disgusting if you really come to my school I remind you don’t eat the food in my school.You will vomit really.One time my homeroom teacher ate lunch in my school he is one English man and he was vomit in my classroom now you can imagine how disgusting the food is .
That all I tell you today see you later.
超级大帅哥 
I see your blog, and I think it was very good, I really like the picture that you put in your blog, but I think it will better if you add more detail about Chinese food from your school, just let us know more about your school
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I am pretty sad to know that its you last blog because I am your big fans.
I can see you put a lot of effort in inquiring the content of Chinese food.
But you still need to be aware to your structure.
Hope that you can write more blog about anything of you.
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Hi! I just want to say that it was fun to met you,even know that it was your last blog but your did it really good, and you had really good interactions between people that reads your blog!But one thing to remind you is that next time please please please! Write more details about the nasty food because I really enjoy that how you write about the food in the school!
——-Eric
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I know you like eating food. But, as we can see, you wrote so many negative things about your school foods. And your point of you don’t like to eat your school food is you think the school cooker always put so many oil in food. So that is your point right. I think I got it.I would like to give you some advice, hope you right more positive things.
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I am very sorry to hear that your homeroom teacher vomited in your classroom after eating the food in the school canteen, that must have been very unpleasant. Also, now I understand why he always eats outside XD
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